I love your colors on this design. The palette seems otherworldly which fits right along in the story. I wonder if you could emphasize his slender build more by narrowing portions of his trunk and maybe his neck just a touch. I really like what you have going with those legs and would love to see that echo more in the rest of the design. Overall, nice and imaginative design!
Ethan! I think this is a great design! I love the long legs and overall feel of the animal. i feel it would fit in the story very well. One thought, the front leg that is lifted up doesn't seem to match the other front leg. Maybe just thin it out and make the Hoof a little smaller. It's a sweet design
What a pretty creature with mystical colors! Awesome work, Ethan. I think your design could benefit on studying real life deer and the structure of their legs. They seem a little wonky to me, right beyond believability. Do some studies of the real thing and I think you could figure how to tweak them to be a bit more believable.
Sweet. I love deer! This guy is cool. I like how his antlers are growing backward, but I wish I knew why. You'll just have to explain it later. An area of improvement is the legs. I agree wholeheartedly with Brooklyn. Their anatomy is a little wonky.